We had a focus group of 6 people who had varied ages throughout our target audience of 15-18 year olds. We asked them to review our second draft of our movie, which can be seen here. This is what each of them said that we could work on to improve our next version.
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| Liam Wraxton - 15 |
"The characters need to be introduced, especially the superheroes, as we never actually learn what they are called."
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| Henry George - 16 |
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| Thomas Hobbs - 18 |
"Some of the transitions didn't help to move the story forward, they were too snappy. You should also work on making the cuts smoother, like when Topaz Spectre kicks the door down "
"The ending shot wasn't strong enough to create a lasting impression, and you should think about including some credits. However, I really liked the opening sequence."
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| Eloise de Carvalho - 15 |
"The order of shots in the trailer were jumbled up too much and didn't create a flowing sequence that was understandable. There were also some large gaps in the plot and unnecessary repition."
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| Bella McCrimmon - 18 |
"You need to include some strong background music, maybe you should consider narration or text to help the audience understand the story, I know it would of helped me."
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| Paige Farrell - 17 |
"Some of the shots dragged on a bit, it would of been better if the pace was increased by cutting shots sooner"
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