Second Draft

We have kept the opening sentence the same from the first draft of our teaser trailer. We have changed the school shots because we felt that the canteen shot had too many distractions in it to be succesful. We also really like how the scene enforces the fact that Georgia is a very lonely character. We also sped it up a bit to fasten the pace of the narration. This then cuts to some shots where she is returning home from a hard day at school. We had to reshoot these as we used too much zooming in our original filming. We also had to include some different shot angles as both of our teachers thought they weren't varied enough. One of my favourites is the shot from below the steps as Bella walks down them into the camera. We reshot all of the first shoots with the same ideas in mind as the first shootings. Tayler came up with an idea of placing the camera inside the box and watching Bella's facial expressions as she opens the box and is shocked by the cape inside. We have changed from the mask to the cape, because we felt that the mask idea was not strong enough to carry on with the theme. We then did a variety of different angled shots of Bella opening the package, which we could then chop and change further on. Finally, we did lots of reshoots of Bella pulling the cape across her, which I will then edit on After Effects to make her turn invisible.

We are next going to show this to our focus group this draft, to get their perspective of it and to see what we could introduce for the next step.